Friday, July 25, 2008

Doobta suraj

ye shaam ki khamosh udasi
jaise kuch kahna chahti hai mujhse
door kahi aasmaan me doobta

hua laal suraj
doobte doobte koi
sandesha deta jaa raha hai…

sayad wo kah raha ki
ae hasne walo
has lo…

mai doob nahi raha hoon
mai to ugne ke taayaari kar raha hoon…
ek naye aabha ek nayi roshni
ek naye divas ke saath…

raat lambi hai to kya
andehra ghanghor hai
to kya hua
mrityu kahin jeevan se
vijayi ho pai hai…
bus jeena ki lalak ho
mrityu to ahsaas hai
jeevan ke hone ka…

ye andehra hi to hai
jo bodh karata hai
logo ko mera hone ka
mai kal phir aauounga
ek naye vishwaas ke saath

mai doobta hua suraj nahi

mai doobta hua suraj nahi.......................

9 comments:

Kunal Vijan - Move Around the World With Me!! said...

nice one!!! pretty gud ;)

AMIT said...

Apki Poems bahut achi hain Apko kahan se inspiration milti hain. I love ur poems.

can we share contact numbers.

Anonymous said...

Sweet Poem

Anonymous said...

i know ur name plz

Anonymous said...

I got ur name, vinay shandilya.
where r u from ? plz tell me

Anant said...

very nice poem vinay. Keep it up.I like one thing very much that maut kaval zindgi ka ahsaans bhar hai....This poem really gives a good msg...

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Anonymous said...

where do live mr. vinay ? u didnot post ur poem again. really u r good poet.

Tarun Babbar said...

Mr. Vinay Tripathi....
This was a very meaningful and impressive poem... Keep up the spirits :)